Thursday, March 26, 2020

Week 10 Story: On The Hunt

By Maria Dawson
I really like how simple these drawlings are. Picture from: Wallpaper Flare















There once was a pair of two unlikely friends one was a cheetah and the other was a lion. While the two were on the hunt the lion looked at the cheetah and said ‘Shhh I can feel a wildebeest presence nearby it is alone too”. The two get into their sneaking stance as they top the hill in front of them to get a better view of the valley.

However, the valley was dead. Nothing in sight in the Savanah except a few scattered dead trees and patches of grass. “LION WHY YOU ALWAYS LYING TO ME. I knew everyone was right about you, you are just a scam who wants everyone to think you have these “powerful being inside you” well I am done I do not need a partner ANYMORE” exclaimed the cheetah as he sped off like a light into the tall grass behind them.

Just then in the weeds 100 paces north a wildebeest appeared on the horizon. “Hmmm if only the cheetah could learn some patience then maybe we would understand each other better” thought the lion to himself. He then proceeded to walk back to camp with his head down making sure to take the long way home.

Cheetah must have had the same idea. Right up ahead he was pacing back and forth murmuring to himself “why would I say such a harsh thing to him he does not have anyone else”. Lion calls up ahead “it is okay I forgive you cheetah oh and by the way I DID see the wildebeest right when you stormed off”. “I am sorry I was so harsh on you earlier you are my best friend I cannot live without you” stated cheetah. “You are right those words did hurt but I understand you were just hungry; can we please try to communicate better in the future?” questioned the lion. “I will try my best” responded cheetah.

Filled with new energy the two palls head back to the hills again. “There, over the tree line, I see him,” said cheetah. The two go back to their stance the lion crept up to the area the creature was roaming while cheetah hung back to give chase if he ran. And in a split second the wildebeest took off with cheetah and lion on his tail lived one pounced on his feet the other on the back and then the beast was no more. “See we make a great team!” said the lion excitedly.



I really like how simple these drawlings are. Picture from: Free SVG














Authors Note: I was inspired by the story named The Ox Who Won the Forfeit because of the moral of the story. This is the main takeaway from the story is how communication can help everyone as well as valuing each other’s abilities. I am drawn to this story immediately because it reminds me of myself and how stubborn I am. In this story, the Ox does not like to be talked to in a harsh town and being told what to do. Because of his actions his owner loses a bet made. Once his owner understood why he was acting this way he treated the Ox with more respect. 


Bibliography: 
Jataka Tales by Ellen C. Babbitt The Ox Who Won the Forfeit

3 comments:

  1. Hey Maria!
    I really enjoyed your story. I thought that it was simplistic yet really got the point across. I was able to visualize what you were writing in my head and it gave a clear picture. I feel that the moral of the story about communication still applies today. It is crazy how stories so old still have relevance in today’s world.

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  2. Hey Maria,

    I really like your site design and method of telling your story. Your word choice really set up and built on the story itself a lot. The image background helped paint a picture of the type of mood you were going for, and you did a really good job on nailing it! I like the dialogue you incorporated into your story as well. I find it tricky myself sometimes to get my point across with the use of dialogue, but you used it quite well. Great job.

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  3. Hey Maria,
    I liked how you kept the story simple and straight to the point and even used more simplistic images which I also really liked. I feel that the way you wrote the story also fit to the story's overall narrative of communication. In good communication there is no need to just keep going on and on if the point they speaker is trying to make never makes it across.I also liked how you included a personal not in your author's note

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